Twin Elves

Hi, so I like the fact that you sketched it out first before painting it digitally; IMO, it's faster to do, more accurate and you can flesh out a lot more detail.

So right off the bat, I can see that you took the bottom image, flipped it and palette swapped it. I encourage you to draw the twins separately, give them both a sense of personality. Gesture drawing will help you out with this, it'll help you to loosen up and try poses that might fit them better (Maybe one twin is more chill and the other ready for action!)

And maybe, they should be interacting with each other in some small way, since people expect for twins to be practically the same entity. Even just glancing at each other from the corner of their eyes will go far!

But this is still nicely done. Nice choice of color and great linework. Good luck!